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10% cutEven leaving aside the roughness of the English which is hard to do because it was just so bad I didn t enjoy this book as much as the first in the series The main character Tor spends about the first third of the book having a serious pity "party and asking a tediously large number of rhetorical estions of himself Then he perks p a little "and asking a tediously large number of rhetorical estions of himself Then he perks p a little starts replacing his monogamous lower class sexual morality with that of the royals which is how all the nobility however far from the actual royal family are referred to This basically boils down to extreme promiscuity #From At Least The Mid # at least the mid persisting beyond marriage and frankly I found it a little repellent Oh best friend you re engaged to my sister but you also want to sleep with my current girlfriend and my fiancee who are two different people and a couple of other women Sure why not Hey you like my mother too right Why not go for it We re told at various places in the two books that people are sometimes jealous but nobody actually seems to two books that people are sometimes jealous but nobody actually seems to just like most of the nobility don t act like the dangerous high handed despots that we re being told about either They re described as something like actual medieval nobles though there are hints that this is a post apocalyptic future but they act like hippies peace free love and egalitarianism man Oh apart from the odd berserker rage of courseAt one point in my reading I was considering in the spirit of the main character s generosity offering to do a free edit The setting is interesting the premise is fresh the main character apart from his tendency to go on and on and his cluelessness and the way he gets down on himself is appealing and different I ve decided not to do that though for a few reasons Firstly I couldn t find a web presence for the author where I could make contact I might not have looked hard enough but the impression I get is that the author doesn t want to engage with readers I couldn t even find out if PS Power is a man or a woman or what country he or she lives in though I m betting on the USA based on the occasional clanging American collouialism that gets randomly dropped into the middle of the prose Secondly editing is the job of the publisher they already have And thirdly as I read on I liked the book less and less Although I d kind of like to know what happens next I won t be buying the next oneIt s a pity I thought I d Is classmates To make matters worse as if they needed it someone is clearly trying to kill him Who would do something like that No one knows for certain On top of that he doesn’t really know if. ,
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Good Read A book on a crafter that #is a slice of life story Enjoying the series as I read through it The adventure of Tor # a slice of life story Enjoying the series as I read through it The adventure of Tor Good book with many nexpected events and decisions by characters I did like the first book better as it felt polished but Power certainly takes you for a ride My main criticism for this series holds this book does not have a true ending While I nderstand it is a series it is a bit gimmicky to end a book on basically a cliff hanger I honestly like the book but as it is you can t read it on its own and still feels satisfied I felt annoyed reading this book Actually I felt insultedThe first in the series was a little rough It was poorly punctuated and a bit rambling But it was nothing like as bad as thisThis one reads like a first draft by someone who was typing too fast and whose grasp of basic spelling is loose to say the least Or as the author would ite likely spell it lose too say the lest The totoo confusion in both directions crops A White Slave in Turkey Book 1 - A BDSM Novel up freuently though not consistently at one point there are three consecutive sentences and two of them have it right and the middle one is wrong There are grocer s apostrophes there are missing apostrophes there are missing words in sentences there are many many incorrect homophonesp to and including he d for head It s a messThose aren t the only issues either One character is mentioned by name twice one of them misspelled before he introduces himself to the viewpoint character for example Part of the reason I say that I feel insulted is that this book is not apparently self published That would be bad enough because I think it s disrespectful to your readers to just slam your first draft p on without doing than a cursory spell check People do it but in my mind it s rude and less than professional It s much worse if you re published by a small press I ve visited the publisher s website and although PS Power s books are the majority of what they put out there are other authors listed there and they are advertising for submissions My advice would be what they put out there are other authors listed there and they are advertising for submissions My advice would be to send them any If they have a copy editor and this book doesn t show any evidence that they do then that person is doing an incredibly poor job That s disrespectful not only to the readers but to the authors They re basically adding no value beyond possibly getting a cover designed I suppose that explains why they only take The royal life is not sitting with Torrance Baker well at all His relationship with his “fiancée” isn’t going as planned his sister is acting weird and giant Counts are trying to beat p
Ound a series I could enjoy and was fully prepared to buy all of them But this is a big letdown CUCK WARNING #BEWARE his entire series in nothing but one continuous event in cuckholdery STAY AWAY AT ALL COSTS DO # his entire series in nothing but one continuous event in cuckholdery STAY AWAY AT ALL COSTS DO BUY If you like this story and you like the main character this book will piss you off I am writing this while I am on the 5th book Counselor though and I like the overall story The Pissed Off Part I pissed off part I say is from my liking the books and the attachment to the main character Tor I will say this Power s has a way of writing that will just suck you into the characters and stories it was the same way for me with the Infected stories No spoilers here I will just say that it a good story with lots to come This one was as good as the first one warning it has non explicit references to sex and oral etc Which may or may not be suitable for my mom or your kids Great book it expand the social aspect of the high society or the nobles and how alien it is to our poor baker boy eventually he guets to figure out some of it and we can see him beguin to adapt wich in fact is a sign of growth for him Now I really hate what happened with his engagementview spoiler I mean I would have prefered if Trice actually didn t liked him instead of the botched plan she cooked Night of the Werewolf (Choose Your Own Nightmare, up on her own like Tor kept telling people if it was all pretending why didn t she told him about it before so he would know it would definetly avoid a lot of the fallout that brough on them hide spoiler The magic system and main character were even better than the first book The betrayal he faced gripped me But the editing was way way worse Many little mistakes spelling punctuation etc and even big mistakes sentences that didn t have a verb made this book worse And then about halfway in it started to get very sexual in a totallynbelievable way By the end the do the right thing even if it kills me country boy raised with conservative moral standards starts a brothel without any pressure to do so and then it ends even ridiculous First half of the book 4 stars fading to 2 overall by the end Excellent Characters continued to develop and draw one further into the story The pace really picks Lay My Burden Down up in the final third of the book and I m so glad I have book three since I will be staring it as soon as I finish writhing this reviewAnd yes typos in this than the first but only mildly distractin. The King is his friend or hates him Either way he needs to figure it out fast because attacks are coming from all sides and if Noram’s newest Knight Esuire can’t figure it out soon he’s de.